The room was dimly lit. Two hurricane lamps cast shadows of the woman on the wall of the hut as she moved about. The crickets in the surrounding bush continued their chirping. The moment she picked me up from the Sharps, I knew just why β we were doing it again.
Her four attendants, who had stepped out of the hut briefly, came in with the first child. Dressed ceremonially, the woman straightened up and met the childβs glistening eyes.
βIt is to make you cleanβ, she said, smiling.
The girl whimpered.
The woman motioned to the attendants, maintaining her grip on my handle. Amidst cries and shouts, firm hands held this first girl in place and then the second, and third, fourthβ¦ There always was screaming, struggling and writhing β¦and then stillness sometimes, as the lifeless body lay limp on the cloth-covered floor.
Her face was devoid of emotions as she made me slice and cut. Fresh blood coursed down my edges and she dabbed me with an old cloth.
They happened regularly β my cuttings. Young girls were brought in and held in place. The woman picked up the little piece of cloth I was in, unwrapped me swiftly and within seconds, my sharp edge was slicing away. The community says they have to cut the girls to make them “clean.”
βCleanβ, the old woman announced.
The young girl laid still for a few minutes on the cloth-covered floor.
One of the attendants, βMα»kαΊΉΜ, helped her up. Each step taken was hell. The blood kept coming too and tears rolled down her motherβs cheeks.
They headed to the healing hut, which was about the same size as the cut hut. It was an overcrowded room with several young girls strewn on the floor. Each spent two days, at most, before the painful walk back home.
This community calls young girls βcleanβ when I cut them.
I wonder what dirt they had in the first place.
This is an awesome piece
This is Sad.πͺ
This is educative and it gives awareness.
Wow! This makes sense. Well done.
Itβs a beautiful piece , and very moving
Wowππ. This is captivating π₯π₯
This is really good and it depicts the goriness of FGM really graphical too. Well done Ebun, this is a great step towards steering us closer to the right direction, an end to FGM.
Just one word. Heartfelt.
To think all these are still happening in this new age is crazy. Nice write up bruh, you penned it well. “I wonder what dirt they had in first place”
Well-done John. I wish you success.π€
Great narrative technique. Thank you for using your talent to lend a voice to this movement.
Great job!!!
Oh my, this narrative is soo pure. Reading it feels like I were in the room where the cutting is being done. This dastardly act really needs to stop. And we would not rest till it’s completely eradicated.
This is a truly great piece.
A beautiful read from a great and visionary man. Thank you, Kolade.
Nice write up dear
I’ve never seen anyone use objects to tell stories..
Keep it upβ¨β¨
Beautiful pieceπ₯°π€©β‘
This is so lovely!
An exposition and reflection on inherent dangers of FGM; It alarms us on the deep sense of worry created by this phenomenon and the roles of all stakeholders. A must read by all!
FGM, so much myth about it.. ‘it makes girl clean ‘, how??? It’s such a painful ordeal, that no girl child should be subjected to experience.. Ebunoluwa, well done.. it the visual imagery for me..
Well-articulated!
This is an educating piece π
Excellent pieceβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
“… I wonder what dirt they have in the first place.”
This is so beautiful. Well done sir.
I love the content, the usage of visual imagery. Very enlighten and loaded. Well done Ebun.
Niceeeee
This is such a great one. Well doneβ€οΈ
Amazing π€©
Fantastic write up
Explicit!β¨ This is reality in words. A must read for everyone. Keep it up broπ
#NOtoFGM
This is so engaging… I wan to read more..
A very beautiful piece. Well-done, John.
This is so nice….I like the perspective,FGM should really be stopped
Wow…Nice piece
Awesome
The device of imagery is perfect! This is hard.
I love the writing perspective of this piece. It’s beautiful β¨Well-done !
It’s a beautiful piece and it captures the focal point with the vivid pictures it painted.
Great write-up. Enlightening with deep perspective into the act.
Great work. Keep it upπ
This was beautifully written in detail. I hope you win. Good luck!
Profound! Well done π
Nice one.
Nice one π
This is breathtaking
Beautiful pieceππ
This is good. Kudos to you dear
Nice write up⦠Keep up the good work John
Beautiful Writeup, Welldone JohnπΉ
This is just beautiful. π₯Ί
Excellent work. This is a very beautiful piece π
Great work
This is very beautiful
Wow..This is nice.
Keep it up.
This is a beautiful piece. Thank you for voicing outβ€οΈ.
Well-penned. Keep it up
Wow! This story is enthralling… Well done!
This is beautiful!
I’m wowed and at the same time touched by this beautiful work. To think I almost got goose bumps reading this; I mean, this is a very vivid picture of the plight of the victims as painted by the talented Ebunoluwa. Thank you
Oh! This is magnificent. Good job, Kolade John
Wow!
This is great!
A good one
It’s the imagery for me.
Well done sir. It’s beautifully written.
Oh wow, keep it up.
A pulsating read.
Great pieceβ€
Great one, keep the good work going.
You nailed it Ebun. It’s a write up that need to be publish to had cover.
Wow such a beautiful write up on a very important topic.
You write so well.
Wow! I love the narrative. I could visualize it in my head.
I also love the ending. Who said they were ever unclean in the first place? Ignorance is a disease!
Well done, Kolade. I’m rooting for ya!
This is a great pieceππΎππΎ
May our voices be heard and this evil, be cubbed!
Well done again Ebun.
Commendable…. lovely piece.
Enjoyed reading this so much! Cheers!
Nice piece
Keep it up
Fantastic! I wonder what’s dirty about the girls
Keep it up, the sky is your starting point
This is a nice write upπͺβ …..keep it up my guyyy
This is an intriguing piece, well done Ebun. Really hope this gruesome deed ends soon.
Beautiful piece, well done.
I really love the perspective of this story. Very moving too.
Well-done, Ebun.
This is impressive. Well done!
Great!
This is such a beautiful piece, I could have sworn I watched this.
Excellent
Fabulous piece
This is so beautiful
Thank you so much, everyone, for engaging the story. Thank you for your kind words. I’m grateful!
Nice piece. So engaging and informative
This is niceee
Intriguing π₯Ίπ
Amazing
A tale that captures the depravity of the female folk in the name of “Tradition”.
Good job barrister J.E Kolade π₯π₯
Very nice
This is it! Nice one, Job.