Lola’s day will start going awry the moment she miscuts Iya Sadia’s fabric. She will blame the red scissors, the one with a history of ruining just the good clothes—always the possessed scissors, never her erring hand. She will then sit hard at the sewing machine, labouring to undo the mess.
She will soon panic as an acrid smell reminds her of the food on fire. Rushing to the kitchen, she will knock off the handbag of a dark, middle-aged woman in the passageway. She will apologize hastily and offer to help in picking up the bag’s content. “Don’t worry,” the woman will say, and Lola will dash off immediately.
Later she will recall some of the objects knocked out of the woman’s bag. Local knife? Small scissors? Who carries those in a handbag? And in a moment of heightened suspicion, she will trace the woman’s movement to Iya Titi’s room and eavesdrop by the window side.
“…Aunty, you’re sure it will go well?”
“Is this my first time doing it?”
“I’m—“
“Come off it, Iya Titi. Our mother did the same for us when we were little. Didn’t we benefit from having the sinful flesh removed? Didn’t we become real women? Lobatan.”
And Lola will hear a little more, just enough to know Titi will soon be back from an errand, at which point the naive girl will be cajoled into following the dark woman somewhere in the neighbouring area.
In shock Lola will wonder what mindless mother would approve of such an all-round agony for her daughter. And for what godforsaken reason?
Not wanting to relive her own agony, she will vow to never allow Titi to undergo what now gradually kills her during her periods. She will call her close friend Doris, and ask her to come over now-now. “Titi’s rescue is crime-worthy,” she will say. And a few moments later, both friends will commit a crime serious enough to put them on the run for weeks. They will cajole and kidnap Titi into a safe place downtown, from where they will plan on what to do until Titi is no victim but victor.
But none of these will happen until a couple of moments later. Right now Lola knives the red scissors into Iya Sadia’s fabric and miscuts it. She sighs upon realising that whatever is cut off cannot be grown again.
Really, whatever is cut off cannot be grown again💔…and that is why more intentional people like Lola are needed in our society to speak and act against FGM. Great piece 👍
Nice one
Hmmmm,what an interesting short story that demonstrate a tragic settings, Lola as an intercessor trying to safe a life end to lost and being indebted….
This a great write- up
A great message been passed across to some of our mothers that still practice these.
Read and digest
This is a great write- up
A great message been passed across to some of our mothers that still practice these.
Read and digest
There’s no benefit in female genital mutilation, there’s more harm to it.
End Female Genital Mutilation!!!!!!
I could almost feel the pain that Titi would have to go through. The act of FGM shouldn’t even exist.
Well composed story that passed a message across to the reader
The story is well composed to educate readers about Female Genital.
Good story
Nice piece! I really hope your voices would be heard and this wicked act would really stop one day.
Girls are fearfully and wonderfully created and it is irrelevant and very unnecessary to cut any part of their body
Yes……..we say No!
Nice sequential story….
The role of girls cannot be underestimated. Hence, the need to end female genital mutilation.
FGM has no health benefit, why do we even practice it? I really hope this act is brought to an end.
Nice piece.
Young girls shouldn’t have to undergo such pain, no matter what. Great job and clean writing. ❤️
I’m amazed this still happens nowadays. We need more enlightenment against this evil #EndFGM
Everyone needs to read this! Good job👍
People like Lola is needed in our society, this wicked act has to come to an end.
You’re just so good with concepts…and one thing is so sure..what ever it is that’s cut off can never have its normalcy again…
A good one you gave up there…
Female should not be deprived of their rights…..they have their lives to live too and they should be allowed to do what they want.
… People like Lola is needed to educate others on the need to stop FGM.
Awesome!
💥This is a message for everyone. EndFGM
Lola took such a brave step! Good writing.
Every girl has the right not to undergo such pain. Lola did well. The story is a big message about what we choose to or not to do in the face of glaring evil. Good job!
Wow… Nice one.
A great piece of writing.
Great work
I hope many will be enlightened about the danger of this terrible act.
Amazing 👏🏻
A brilliant way to pass an important message, well done! 👍🏽
Wow! Great piece… FGM must end in our time!
Thank you for the strong message you passed through this story
I love the intro, the midpoint and the way you ended.
Well done, Joseph. This is a beautiful piece.
FGM really should be stopped!
Good Job. Babjossy. You are well talented and this is just the beginning. i love what you write and how you write
Indeed, FGM is a menace that needs to be totally eradicated at all costs. This is so beautifully written ❤️. Weldone!